Wednesday, June 08, 2005

an excellent composition exercise

who says politics can't be useful? Bush Aide Softened Greenhouse Gas Links to Global Warming - New York Times

the attached graphic is a textbook example showing how vague language destroys a paragraph's intent. yay for the white house.

[Update: according to the white house, global warming is a myth. so...why are these people moving again? things are melting, but it's not global warming. just...melting. got it.]

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